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pulses knocking

press your fingers here
are you feeling the soft knocks
coming from within?
that’s my love for you speaking
out, wanting to be let in

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written by Tiny Fawns for #DiscoverWP

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  1. Love this sensory wording – the pulse, fingertips, knocking. There’s sight, sound … and it expresses for me the times when I’m longing for connection yet trusting giving space – like waiting for a baby to be born and held

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    February 5, 2017
    • This is such a lovely interpretation of the emotion behind the poem! Thank you for your comment and for reading. 🙂

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      February 5, 2017
      • Thanks for hearing it. I hesitate to add words when replying to beautiful works already …. although I’m guessing it is nourishing to know how your poem sparks other people’s hearts ❤️

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        February 6, 2017

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