Poetry from Brianna Dawn.


ask someone if their
injuries have fully healed
wait for the answer
as it will reveal a truth
about the pain they have faced
in life – is the wound a cut
or is it a broken heart
or was it the final breath
of a loved one, departed
or the unknown feeling of
whether or not existence
has significance or is
a whirlwind of vanity
filled with scratches and bruises
we struggle to heal
from and be released
written by Tiny Fawns for daily prompt: heal

4 Responses to “or”

  1. emariemon

    The line, ” or whether or not existence has significance…” really struck me in this poem. It is like this long string of thought and is beautiful all together but admits all of that thought that was the line that stood out the most to me.

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